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My Poetry and Commentary on Life

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  • Reasons Why

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    communication, conversation, desire, hope, literacy, love, obsessions, poetics, poetry, relationships, response

    I write
                to open           
                            my heart           
                            my mind
                            my life
                                                    to you to me
                            your heart           
                            your mind
                            your life
                                                    to me to you
                to create
                            a world
                            an harbor
                            a retreat
                                                    for me for you
                            a world
                            an harbor
                            a retreat
                                                    for you for me
    I write
                to seduce
                to woo
                to bed
                                                    you for me
                                                    me for you
    (May 25, 2013)

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  • the white noise of the world

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    life, meaning, poetry, relationships

    most of the time I’m slow
    to put pen on paper to see
    the obvious truth in front
    of me as if a brick smacked
    deus ex machina into my forehead
    —ouch– not again I hate it
    when I am the densest member
    of the team and last to see
    the joke being played on me
    as if what I understand to be
    is somehow less than what
    the swarm of the world allows
    (May 25, 2013)

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  • Tableaux

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    acceptance, community, paradigms, poetry

    everyone frozen
    into stock roles
    butcher baker
    teacher preacher
    peon and king
    our lines
    are read
    off stage
    no need to move
    our mouths
    the words echo
    to an empty hall

    (from Sonnet, a renga, 2011-20012)

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  • Two Views of a Teacher

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    critical theory, education, poetry, school work

    1.    resistance
    too insistent
                in your insistence
                            that we must be
    the way you wish
                us all to be
                            obviously
    yet not so
                obvious to you
                            that we are
    and we are
                not so willing
                            to be like you
    2. acceptance

    your hand
    metaphorically
    graces my arm
    as you speak
    encouraging me
    to take a chance
    to jump toward life
    to be happy
    to trust
    your faith
    in us all
    (May 23, 2013)

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  • lust

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    life, love, relationships

    after a day in the hill country
    we stopped and bought peaches
    on the side of the road
    we ate them all in the car
    when touched the juice oozed from
    their skin like thick blood from old wounds

    (from Sonnet, a renga, 2011-2012)

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  • Cliche Thinking Cliches

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    poetry, thinking, ways of knowing, writing

    I’ve noticed I use many of the same images/similes/metaphors in my poems over the years. Can one plagiarize oneself? Are there personal clichés, as there are communal ones?  When do the words you use become your own? I’m not really asking for answers to these questions. They are ideas I have visited before, therefore becoming ironic considering the questions. Don’t all writers have themes they return to again and again, like old dogs digging in familiar ground hoping to find that one bone that still has a bit of flesh hanging on it? I guess I am just feeling the angst of “make it new,” but more on a personal level, than to reshape the world. Of course, Pound in that phrase did not mean create something from whole cloth; I have always taken it to mean to make the ideas of centuries into meaningful constructs for the time we are living in now. There is nothing completely new: every atom of me is an atom of you is not that far off from Thales’ everything is water, or George Harrison’s life flows on within you and without you.
                I wonder if we use images/similes/metaphors as patterns (after all the brain is a pattern seeking organ), in order to create a familiar order in the chaos of our personal universes.  Millions of epistemes in constant flux and inter-communication create the illusion of an ontic reality: so we function as if there is a ground we all walk upon. Doesn’t that then create a common ground? Even if the commonality is allusive and illusive? I suppose what this jibber-jabber brings me back around to is that we all need to examine the clichés/images/similes/metaphors we employ and imbibe in as a way to see into how we are controlled by our communal and personal languages. Not that we can ever be free from the constructs, but perhaps we can make them new; take them to a tailor to better fit our current shapes.  And by we, I of course, mean I. Another personal cliché I employ: to conflate all pronouns into myself.

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  • 2. Chop Wood

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    community, early work, life, poetry, work

    May 24, 1995
    I am a rose unfolding
    into the day.  A butterfly
    flits her tongue before fluttering
    away.  With whom does responsibility lie?
    The cathedral rises to greet the sky.
    A glazier packs his tools away.  

    (from My Book of Changes, 1994-1995)

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  • The Flesh of Dreams

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    acceptance, life, poetry

    Eventually,
    nothing remains
    for even vultures
    to pick clean
    from my bones.
    (May 21, 2013)

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  • corollary response

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    communication, conversation, life, love, poetry, response, writing

    What I see,
    or would say,
    is in your hands:
    so tell me
    what your eyes
    view as true.
    Your words
    grow in me,
    like wildflowers
    out of ash.
    Proof enough
    in the words
    I speak;
    through silence,
    through tears,
    my truth opens
    unafraid
    before you.
    (May 20, 2013)

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  • St. Deni

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    acceptance, audacity, desire, life, poetry

                            from all pleasure, under pretense
                            to lie to God.
    thinking
    insupportable
                not slow to
                                                                            live henceforth
    on account of the odor of embalming
    Let us say at once
                            “I am jealous of it.”
                            he hired
                               a poor appearance
                from time to time,
                                                                                                    He
                                                                gave himself out
    (May 19, 2013: words “found” in order, p. 397, Les Miserables by Victor Hugo)

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  • The Dream Concerned a Hemorrhage

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    borders, dream, early work, poetry

    the walls, taut like rubber stretched,
    break,
    tear as if by design;
    images, like blood, pour
    from me, at me
    in paradox:
    You should be
    this, you
    have been
    this, you
    came from
    this, you
    are- – –
    in a circle the edge
    defines- – -at any time
    you are always
    here- – –
    in curved space you
    step away to be
    closer to where
    you are:
    so follow an arc straight
    through to a circle
    and here you are:
    then, now, forever
    the center.
    the dream concerned a hemorrhage.
    the fabric thinned,
    the pattern broke into fibers
    frayed like water
    bursting through a sluice.
    my world flowed into the other
    like air sliding
    through the neck
    of a bottle
    pouring wine;
    each flowed into each.
    I was a conduit,
    an electric circuit
    drawing and discharging
    the current of the world.
    all life, all death
    pulsed through my heart.
    like tides
    along a continent’s rim,
    the universe flowed
    into me, then pulled
    everything out to sea.
    (Circa 1992)

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  • Ablutions and Sacrifice

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    acceptance, existential angst, life, mythic, poetry, ritual

    Beer is not enough
    to sate the gods
    of tension tonight;
    so, he pours another
    bourbon and retreats
    into himself, to wander
    within his broken
    thoughts like crows
    picking bits of flesh
    which cling between
    the coastal rocks.
    (May 18, 2013)

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  • Privilege of the Middle-Class

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    critical theory, irony, mythic, poetry

    I wake up sated
    with the coming night’s
    dinner menu
    in mind;
    there is an order
    in the world.
    (May 18, 2013)

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  • ambient

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    life, love, paradigms, poetry

    his first thought
    like dawn
    over the trees
    in the park
    bends towards
    her
    not
    blatantly
    or
    obsessively
    but constant
    like wind
    slowly
    fluttering
    the lace
    sheers
    through
    an open
    window
    or a loose
    lock
    of her hair
    tickling
    the nape
    of her neck
    (May 17, 2013)

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  • still without motion

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    acceptance, borders, love, metaphor, poetry, relationships

    no words
    still
    a cold vacuity
    like space
    the absence
    a presence
    palpable
    on the tongue
    the distance
    between
    a yes
    a no
    my heart
    yours
    (May 17, 2013)

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