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My Poetry and Commentary on Life

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  • Eleven Frameworks

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    dream, life, liminal, meaning, metaphor, obsessions, paradigms, poetry, ways of knowing

    We look through
    our reflection
    in the window
    to see the world
    **
    once I read glass
    never quite solidifies
    so old windows seem
    to ripple like water
    **
    his hands bleed
    from the fragments
    of glass scattered
    now across the floor
    **
    I place my hands
    upon the pane
    the sun’s warmth
    washes through me
    **
    outside of the house
    defined separate
    by the questionable
    solidity of glass
    **
    I grow into
    what I see
    in the bisecting
    window frames
    **
    heading home late
    he imagines seeing her
    through the window move
    like curtains in a breeze
    **
    she sees him in the window
    waves in happy expectation
    he steps back stirred
    as if by a soft wind
    **
    from the outside edge
    a spider weaves her net
    across the sill whispering
    jump my love jump
    **
    the clunking brutality
    of a chunked brick
    shatters the charmed
    safety of the window’s light
    **
    in spring an open
    window airs out
    stale winter
    gathered like dust
    (June 2012)

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  • Taking Offence

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    existential angst, irony, life, poetry

    not so much a
    catastrophic event
    as a foot slip
    on a mountain pass
    a pebble bounces
    twice against the
    rock face before
    vanishing in silence
    no one notices
    except perhaps for
    a chameleon
    sunning on a rock
    like a little boy
    who did not get
    his wish I turn
    and walk away
    (June 2012)

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  • Epiphany

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    acceptance, existential angst, hope, irony, life, metaphor, paradigm shifts, poetry, ways of knowing, work

    It’s wearisome! And the Queen, the Sorceress who lights her fire in the pot of earth, will never tell us what she knows, and what we are ignorant of. — Arthur Rimbaud, After the Flood
    Yesterday,
                a wind tore through
                            my state.
    Today I survey
                the damage
                the loss
    of trust           
    in the day’s patterns.
    So much
                fragility
                is hidden
                by routine,
                            a shield
                            of the commonplace,
    so easily shattered
    by the simplest mischance.
    And now,
    I stand in silence
                studying the ground
                at my feet.
    A leaf
                trembles
    then falls
    through the still air.
    I tremble
                in doubt,
    then look up
                as if
                            expecting someone;
    yet
    only cicadas continue
                            to grind through
    this unrelenting heat.
    I come to a slow understanding
                of this world
    I have folded
                myself within.
    ( June 2012)

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  • I haven’t posted on this in 6 years.

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    teaching, Uncategorized

    I originally signed up so I could comment and read on friends blogs. I normally blog at http://www.layeredwords.blogspot.com
    I rediscovered I had this account when I tried to comment on another friends blog today. Who knew I still existed in this part of cyberreality.

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  • Meeting

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    irony, metaphor, poetry, summer, teaching, thinking, ways of knowing

    I sit here and listen to them talk
    my muscles twitch as if lost
    in a forest in deepest winter
    each word crosshatches my heart
    like ice across a mountain pond
    my silence aches to crack
    winter’s long deadening hold
    (June 2012)

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  • Attention Deficit

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    existential angst, life, poetry, thinking

    Two days ago,
    you noticed eight
    unopened
    cactus flowers;
    today,
    their wilted remains
    hung limp and brown
    above the ground.
    Everyday,
    you walk this path;
    where was
    yesterday?
    (June 2012)

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  • Into the Wood

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    communication, community, conversation, language, life, liminal, meaning, poetry, social construction

    Once in Thetford forest,
    we walked drinking cider
    from a plastic jug, tripping
    over our own thoughts when
    Loretta mentioned something
    she heard from a friend,
    or from her sister Shelly,
    which made me think of Chaucer.
    What her story was, or which tale,
    now is lost in my memory;
    but thirty years ago, I saw strands
    of meaning interwoven like
    mist between a darkening wood:
    Poetry sang directly to a few,
    who in turn spoke to a neighbor
    across a fence, who told a friend,
    who late one night alone
    over a drink had an idea
    first hinted at by two
    people he had never met.
    (June 2012)

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  • Pebble

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    love, paradigm shifts, poetry

    a quick side arm flick
    sends it skipping
    across the lake’s surface
    one two three times it lands
    each touch along the way
    like her hand upon his arm
    becomes a center
    of an expanding circle
    a heart opening to love
    a universe changing into itself
    (June 2012)

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  • Fatherly Advice

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    children, family, hope, life, love, poetry

                   for E, Q and L
                            Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all
                            Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.
                                                                –John Keats
    This is it.
    This is where you are now, always.
    Acceptance is not acquiescence.
    It is not easier, a rabbit warren
    of complexity awaits.
    It is fun;
    create the life you want.
    Make Love
    the priority,
    with others and yourself.
    Never fear, for there lies chains.
    There will always be doubt;
    listen, but not controlled.
    Life is not to wait for;
    it is now.
    Be:  that is All.
    (June 2012)

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  • Ontology

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    god, irony, life, paradigms, poetry, ways of knowing

    what is here now
    and only this
    anything else
    sheer conjecture
    a blind pretence
    granting solace
    (June 2012)

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  • Party Talk

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    communication, conversation, irony, meaning, poetry, social construction, sonnets, storytelling

    stories hack out spaces about the room
    complaints about traffic work and spouses
    some show she saw or daily news horror
    forms a skin across the conversations
    holds momentarily the life we live
    in recognizable if repellant
    shapes through which we can all negotiate
    with each other for at least one more day
    an impromptu performance of stock roles
    which flower and play out within moments
    the gadfly Falstaff the aging jejune
    the parent and child the cold jaded eye
    we all mouth our lines on cue and no one
    notices we have forgotten the words

    (June 2012)

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  • Envoi

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    conversation, language, life, literacy, meaning, poetry, social construction

    and it’s as if they are talking to me
    directly without intercession of the page
    or the intervening interval of centuries
    their voices sharp snide and happy
    inviting me into their conversation
    like hosts at an ongoing dinner party
    here have a drink one of those canapés
    with the soused shrimp quite delightful
    I assure you come meet this person
    and I do and then another and another
    quickly as if I’m absorbed in a book
    which I am as are you who have read
    these words I scribbled down tonight
    as if I were talking directly to you
    (May 2012)

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  • Silence Creates Consensus

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    existential angst, irony, life, poetry, thinking

    “Hush, little baby, don’t say a word.”
    so you speak
                as if
    what I say
    to you
    does not
    exist
    as if
    I
    do not
    exist
    as if
    I have nothing
    to say
    because you
    do not
    want to hear
    what
    I say
    so you say
                shhhh
                silence
                shhhh
                no more
                shhhh
                who are you
                anyway
    thus I am silenced
    are we in agreement
    (May 2012)

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  • Rags

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    communication, conversation, education, existential angst, irony, language, poetry, ways of knowing


    scraps of language
                residual remains
                            like soap film
    or
    ashy skin
          something still
                to slough off
    my students talk the words
                the words
         weave about them
                like rope
    looped lazily
                across a tree branch
    (May 2012, from Wisp, work in progress)

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  • from Wisps

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    irony, life, liminal, meaning, obsessions, poetry

    4.




    it takes so little
    so little to disturb
    my day so little
    to fall down and die
    I take my troubles
    shuffle forward
    step back a bit
    slip side to side
    such indecision
    such quandary
    again repeated
    becomes my dance
    a pebble slaps
    into the dust
    becomes enough
    to shape my lust

    (May 2012, work in progess)

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